This is a great recap of _The Voice_ Season 28 finale! It’s clear you have a passion for the show and know how to break down each performance.
Here are some things I particularly liked:
* Strong Opinion: You clearly state who you think should win (Aiden Ross) and back it up with reasons. This gives your recap personality and makes it more engaging.
* Descriptive Language: Phrases like «ridiculous performances,» «heart-wrenching renditions,» and «cinematic version» bring the performances to life for the reader.
* Good Structure: The recap is well-organized, with each contestant getting their own section and a clear conclusion summarizing your thoughts.
Suggestions for improvement:
* More Context: For readers who haven’t been following _The Voice_, you could briefly explain why some singers are considered underdogs or favorites going into the finale.
* Less Repetitive Phrases: You use «said» a lot when describing what the coaches said. Varying your verbs would make this section more interesting (e.g., «declared,» «raved,» «emphasized»).
Overall, this is a well-written and informative recap of _The Voice_ Season 28 finale. Keep up the great work!
